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Won't You Help Me Breathe by ~A-Beautiful-Martyr:iconA-Beautiful-Martyr:



The door’s open
Come take a look inside my mind
These feelings are suffocating me
Won’t you help me breathe?

I know, you know, you’ll have to help me again
I don’t think that I’d die without you
But I wouldn’t be where I am today
Is it bad that I feel like this?

These-these hearts I let you break them
Set ‘em up to watch you knock them down
Enjoying every minute of the time you spent
Leaning on my shoulder feeling sorry for yourself
Break the hearts and break the promises you made;
I’ll be here for you

I don’t want to hurt you
But I just can’t help myself
The mind plays tricks on these tired eyes
But what happens to you?
You’re so whole-heartedly blind

Take me now; we’ll just die later
Don’t make me waste my breath
Telling you things you already know
But don’t tire of hearing, yet
I can’t help myself and I can’t breathe through this smoke
Oh, won’t you help me breathe?
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Another poem. This ones fairly obvious, I think, but if you need an explanation, ask.

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:iconchemmisforest:
I really like this one. Very beautiful and cutting in a way.

"Take me now; we’ll just die later" is probably my favorite line.

Well done!

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I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior.

If an atheist is seeing the anger flowing from the pages and is disturbed by it, you're probably doing it wrong.

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